after reflecting on my writing from my summer essay to my TK essay the biggest difference ive noticed in the structure is the fact that i actually have some sort of structure to my essay. in my summer essay i mostly just retold the plot into my own words but really didnt reflect and try to find a deeper meaning in what my essay was about. for example i had no examples. evidence everything was just put in there. i had some sort of a thesis but with very weak veiws. now on my tk ive developed strong ideas and are supported with strong evidence explanations, examples and to top it off a strong conclusion.
2. ive noticed a big improvement in my thesis statements. in my summer essay my thesis on "The Pearl" was " i think the theme is, money can change who you are" talk about a clechay. my thesis ideas were so general and generic. and my improvement was shown in TK essay with my thesis " the message that harper is trying to get across to the reader is, dont let societies blindness, change who you morally are.
3. the element that makes writing easier most for me is the body paragraphs, before honors english 9 and in 8th grade and my summer essay i spread my ideas in essays randomly and in no specific order. Having body paragraphs make organization tremendously improved and my ideas seem like they have a stronger point because there in the approipriate place
4 my biggest goal for my writing is that in my essays for me to be able to link my ideas/body paragraphs to have a more smooth transition. i think if i could become skilled at that format it would immensly improve my essay quality.
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